Kingsbrae 25.2
25 June 2017
Mist at Jarea
Moving in with the tide,
drawing gauze curtains
over the islands,
climbing, so silent,
pebbles and rocks
to arrive at our windows
and block out the sun.
The mist’s grey face
presses against the panes.
Long lost friends,
come back to haunt us,
loom out of our past.
They bear memories
born beyond the mist,
living now in, and for, this mist.
They come stalking us and tap
with long, cold wisps of fingers
at locked windows and doors,
bolted so they can’t get in.
Love it. There is an ‘advancing’ feel about the whole poem. I’d remove ‘and that’ and other ‘that’.
Thanks, Jan. hey add a ‘rhythm’ to it when I read it, but they are superfluous, grammatically speaking. I’ll get rid of them.