
Kingsbrae 12.4
12 June 2017
Seagull
Seagull on the wind
wing tip tilted
for maximum lift
Wheeling up and away
the gull-wing sway of him
climbing his celestial staircase
in a rush of blue air
Light his flight steps
danced to wind music
played over beach and wave
Watch him wave good-bye
with a waggle of his wings
and a well-judged flick
his sea gull tail painting
neat brush strokes
Comment: Looking through my notebook, I saw the original of this poem, scribbled while I sat in the car, waiting for my friend. I re-read it and admired its simplicity. So I copied it here. The earlier poem I wrote, with the same title, Seagull, is more worked and much more elaborate. You can find it here. I would be interested to know which of the two versions you prefer. A second question: can they both stand as separate poems, even though they overlap in their inspiration and imagery? Let me know what you think.








