
Here’s the Beaver Pond at Mactaquac instead!
… and once when we went to Pwll Ddu, to the Black Pool, in English, where the stone bank holds the river back and we can sail our boats on the pool and the water is warmer than the sea … and one day, a long time ago, we saw this snake swimming across the backed up river, between the banks of reeds at the end of the valley, of Bishopston Valley, where the trees meet the salt marsh which leads into the sea … and he was a big snake, though I don’t remember what sort of snake he was … and he didn’t have a care in the world, just swimming across the water in the sunshine, hissing to himself, then he climbed the bank with a slither and a slurp … and was gone as quickly and as mysteriously as he came and we were left there playing, paddling, building dams, throwing stones at lumps of wood and pretending they were enemy battleships, waiting to be sunk … and playing ducks and drakes … and making the flat stones, like pieces of slate, slip and skip across the surface, one bounce, two bounces, six, seven, eight, and nine bounces … and the little ripples on the pool’s surface moved slowly outwards and suddenly my cousin trod on a broken bottle and there was blood everywhere … because someone had used a bottle for a battleship and had broken it with a broadside of stones … and we had to stop everything and strap him up and take him home and then he went to hospital and they gave him stitches, eighteen stitches, in the sole of his foot, and an injection … and suddenly what with the snake and the broken bottle, we cursed the pool at Black Pool, at Pwll Ddu, the name of which the boys from London could never pronounce, with their different accents and their capital styles, and though they were a part of us, like their mother was a part of us, they weren’t really part of us and they didn’t speak like us and they didn’t have our accents and they couldn’t pronounce the Welsh … and the neighbours laughed at them behind their backs …
you are the master of the long sentence. I would have been one of the ones who couldn’t pronounce the pond correctly!
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Thank you, Jane. So many Spaniards and Hispanics are no longer capable of reading Cervantes, because the sentences are too long! He has now been purged and re-edited in a ‘simplified’ version! Some of the joy of writing, for me, at least, is allowing the words to pull my pen along in a long sequence of linked thoughts and images.
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Especially in my science fiction, I love the short sentence. Verbless and like going up or down a set of stairs.
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I don’t think people who deal in Twitter and minimal number of letters can handle long sentences anymore. That is probably one reason why my work is turned down. The complications of subordinate clauses and complicated thought patterns are just too much for twitching thumbs!
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