El sueño de la razón produce monstruos.
When reason sleeps, monsters are born.
Francisco de Goya.
… threshing from side to side panting and pouting mouths open at pillow’s edge with tongues flapping fiercely as the sharp hook pierces the dry upper lip and drives its root canal into the roof of the mouth where shadows walk and talk to silk worms wrapped in their ghostly cocoons and memories race through tumbledown alleys where shuttered windows wave white hands with silver rings sparkling on gnarled arthritic fingers and doleful uncertainties rush upwards in a cloud of bubbles to cover the sun and blot out daylight as dark descends and grief lies still on dawn’s distant altar where long-forgotten crimes stir and return each night to hunt and haunt the poor and pour fierce tears as a tap pours water and offers subliminal ablutions as the victims on their knees wear wild widows’ weeds as they kneel at each hand-carved wooden station where that dark cross flourishes with its black beads dangling from outstretched nails as necklaces clack and rosaries gnash the falseness of teeth that are white and bright and spotted with fool’s gold that reflects in a counterfeit mirror of surrogate corpulence with fleshed and bloodied hands handcuffed like some rabbit in the headlights of an oncoming crash and the car’s bones lie beached like great white whale bones on the bleached shores of an illusion that moves in time to the continuous clicking of claws and the clacking of needles knitting outwards to build a monstrous guillotine topped like a dictionary with red bonnets that move in the air as a knife edge carves night winds that slice the body’s earthbound cage of skin and bone and strip it of the fur that the white rabbit sheds as it climbs its golden staircase back to the moon from which it descended on this night of nights when sleep is a mystery revealed only to initiates who have mastered their duties and milked this market where a caravan of camels humps its way skywards like dark gibbous moons that burrow a tunnel and seek the fly’s high-pitched note with its angry black mote stuck to the cobweb that nests in whatever brain awaits the wind’s clean broom that wipes the slate clean of wild words and wars that are waged across scars that hack tracks and cross roads over this wilderness wherein we are all star-crossed and lost …
4 thoughts on “Obsidian’s Edge 25 (revised)”
The links and flow of idea to idea is very like the garbled connections within a dream sequence.
Thanks, Jane: that’s exactly what I am trying to reproduce. The ideas are so personal yet I try to link them back into the main themes that emerged in At the Edge of Obsidian / Obsidian’s Edge. I seem to have achieved this from time to time …
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Thank you, Tanya: I am so pleased you like it. It comes partly (largely!) from your earlier comments. I have made some changes too, to adapt to the new sequence of partially structured images. I am thinking of doing a post on how the comments and the BTL (Below The Line) likes help me, as a writer, in terms of focus and revision. Bistro is nearly ready for printing … I am very happy with the manuscript. Much of it has appeared here, in one form or another. I look forward to its appearance. Blessings and many thanks!
That definitely changed the focus, requiring a word by word reading as the reader drifts through the dream sequence. I love it!